Planning StoryBoard for my Wilson commercial

1.In the first box the server is doing his pre-serving ritual. He bounces the ball three times. 2. In the second box the server is doing his last part of the pre-serving ritual. He spins the ball in his hand. 3. In the third box the server is tossing up the ball the serve it over the net. 4. In the fourth box the server is hitting the volleyball to the back right of the court. 5. In the fifth box the volleyball is shown heading for the back right corner and you hear a crowd cheering after. 6. The screen goes black still being able to hear the crowd cheer and the phrase Own the court appear.